PROUD- Juno DawsonI saw this book next for similar reasons, its bright and colourful cover stood out on the bookshelf. The fist raised in black solidarity was also a good touch for racial inclusivity which is often ignored in LGBT representation. This book was helpful because it is a collection of short stories and poetry, I was able to find a good range of queer and minority illustrators from it which is something I have been wanting to improve on.
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Gender Identity- Andy PasschierI thought this book was a good reference of how to make an "adult" theme adaptable for children. The brighter, child like illustration are visual languages for children's books. However it was written with scientific accuracy but in a less formal tone. It was a good find and is helping me think about the tone of the text for my book.
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How to Catch a Star- Oliver JeffersThis book caught my eye for the illustrations simplified style. It makes sense for younger audiences to have characters be made into more digestible shapes than anatomically correct figures. I also liked the texture from the illustrations, they felt dreamlike. Whether they were created using a digital medium or more traditional mediums is something I want to find out because it definitely looks interesting to me.
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Not Now Noor!- Farhana IslamI found this book in the general picture book area of the bookstore. I loved the inclusivity of a Muslim family and story-line. The simple stylisation I thought helped get an idea of each characters personality from the cover. That Noor who is center comes from a big family and is a prankster, the character with red glasses winking implied that maybe she is as well. I loved the muted colours as well, they all worked together I thought and weren't too overly stimulating.
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Lizzy and the Cloud- Fan BrothersThis book I liked the colour palette, the muted and faded colours are well done. Highlighting the cloud as being important. I again liked the simple style of illustration from Lizzy, which reminded me of Quentin Blake's illustrations. The colours looked faded, and made the yellow look brighter by comparison. Without it being a neon colour.
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Whilst redesigning Mummy and Mam I watched and researched a lot about the representation of Black people in media. I learnt about Colourism: which is the discrimination of a person based on their skin tone. It is a prejudice that places darker skin lower than lighter skin.
Given my own mixed race identity I knew it was important to represent the different racial groups positively. While in the story it doesn't impact the story line portraying minorities positively is important to me. |
I went back in using shape theory to better adapt them for the story, I learnt that shorter or rounder characters are perceived as kind or cute. Slimmer sharper characters can be either villainous or stern. The difference being if the shapes are rounded off or not. (an example being Mario verse Waluigi. Mario being rounder and softer means hes seen as more friendly, Waluigi is taller and has sharper feature so is seen as less appealing to the audience).
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Using this technique for an alien was interesting, I wanted Juniper to use the stereotypical "little green alien" visual language. I wanted her to look like a young child (around 6-8), so a tip i picked up last year was children's faces tend to fit into a square. Meaning their heads are bigger compared to their faces as they haven't developed yet.
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For Matilda 'the goths' appearance I referenced classical goth makeup. High contrast, sharper lines, high and big backcombed hair.
I wanted to make Matilda a nice character, Goths are seen as "scary". However they're the nicest people you'd meet. I want her to look like she's in black and white compared to the other more colourful characters. I took a lot of inspiration from Siouxsie and the banshees. |
For Matilda's final look, I wanted to reference the trad goth aesthetic. I want her to look like a friendly goth character, who is relatively quiet but accepts Juniper for her weirdness. Solidarity in weirdness. I imagine Matilda is actually kind of short, but her hair and boots give her added height.
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For Becky's final design I wanted to use a lot of pink. Pulling on the idea of the bratty and spoilt girl. I thought her and Juniper having similiar colour palettes could be an interesting reason why Becky rejects Juniper.
I referenced Japanese-British singer Rina Sawayama. I wanted the characters to be diverse and thought having an east asian representation was important. I also used square character design for her. To show her younger age which contrasts her fiercer attitude. |
For Humphreys character design I used a lot of square shapes. This helped separate them from the more feminine characters. I envisioned Humphrey as being non-binary. This is an interesting concept for a child character as there is debates on if its something children know. However I really liked that Humphrey represents the fluidity of expression for more artsy people in their design.
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With Humphreys, design I wanted to reference androgynous fashion. I envioned Humphrey identifying as Non-Binary and using they/them pronouns. As a masc presenting character I imagined he'd be a little taller than some of the other characters. I referenced Conan gray, an Asian-American singer. He experiments with androgyny and I thought this inclusion would be cool for potential gender questioning kids to see.
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FarahFarah is a complex character. She represents an autistic character, she spends a lot of time alone and it generally quite quiet. She also wears hijab and dresses modestly. For someone who was brought up in a mixed Catholic/Muslim house I still needed to research modest clothing. As well as how to best illustrate a hijab wearing character.
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I found it helpful to look at both written and video documents for information. The concept for her character related most to Autism, I would define her as being Sensory Sensitive (overstimulated by sensory input). For her interactions with Juniper I think it would be best to show that Juniper is quite overstimulating to Farah (due to her own excitement). This loud, energetic and very colourful alien puts Farah into a shutdown (The bodies inability to function when overwhelmed). I think showing Juniper learning and understanding this and then apologizing would be helpful to educate anyone else who is confused on autism.
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For her modest dress sense, I found a few helpful videos on modern modesty. This takes influence from western trends so muslim women and girls can also join in on them. For her young age I also know the rules are slightly more relaxed and tend to be taught when the child gets older. This information really helped with the reasoning behind her design. I learnt from my research that most modest muslims tend to dress in darker or neutral colours. (this is different from person to person). The reason for this is to draw less attention to themselves. This helped me reason why shes in more neutral older clothes. It links to the religious views she represents. While her heart scarf ages her down a little more and shows her younger age.
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HumphreyHumphrey is also an interesting character. I chose to illustrate them as being from Eastern Asia. Whilst also presenting in mixed gender clothing. (wearing a skirt over jeans). I had to do some research to help develop his character and why they appear this way.
For a child audience to comprehend I'd say Humphrey is more Androgynous. Mixing both masculine and feminine characteristics. I don't want Juniper to offend his style so it isn't something that will be discussed in the book. (its too heavy to do in one page). However this information helps to explain my design choice. As well as represent an East Asian in a cool way as someone who isn't East Asian themselves. |
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Identifying as non binary is difficult to explain to many people, because it goes against the western idea of gender. It is an absence of one or feeling in the middle of man and woman. Its difficult to represent because each non binary person will experience or define it differently. For Humphrey with research I believe they could use both They/Them and He/Him pronouns, for children's understanding I would probably use either. I think Humphrey relates to feeling in the middle or male and female which is why they wear a skirt with a traditionally masculine outfit. It was also helpful to learn that many Asian cultures (pre-colonialism) actually identified the presence of a third or other gender identity. It was an interesting link to Humphreys East Asian influence. It was also important to me to have a POC as a non binary character because there is a misunderstanding that it is a western only identity (it isn't).
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For the research into East Asian culture I would say that Humphrey and twin, Becky are Japanese. This influence their colour palettes because I wanted to represent darker Asian skin tones as well as curlier hair. Both of which are viewed as being bad qualities in the culture sadly.
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Square books are used the least out of all the formats. There for they stand out the most, because of how unique they are. Their unconventional form is the balance of portrait and landscape. They lend themselves to mostly image based pages. Like photography books or graphic novels.
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Landscape book formats are used for picture based books. These books are arranged horizontally. The larger page space allows for a more immersive reader experience. This is beneficial for story telling. The sentences can be structure longer.
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Portrait books are the traditional format for printing books. These books are arranged Vertically. They are common for narrative books and the sentence structures tend to be shorter to fit the page.
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I did have an idea for a cover like this, relating more to a scene from the story where Juniper introduces herself to the class. I thought this concept would be a fun compositional because I could work up a chalk typeface and add the text over the boar to make it look like it was written on the board.
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This is the final for that example, its the bathroom scene. IN cartoons the scenes are usually colourful and patterned. Unlike the real life counterparts. I tried to make the scenes fun and childlike, pulling from a design trend called Danish Pastel. For other scenes I pulled from the palettes of what characters were in it.
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Above shows the process I followed for illustrating the spreads for the book, it appears pretty early in the story but made me really enjoy the project. I started with my rough thumbnail in pencil, then moved onto colour palettes in marker (once I nailed the composition). I tried to make a few versions. I wanted the palette to be pastel and visually simple to look at. I then made the final
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Once I had my illustrations done I followed the process from artist Sabina Fenn. This process helped because I wasn't sure on how to digitally clean up analogue illustrations.
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